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Title: Agent J (Paris) - The Fate of an Agent
Author: [livejournal.com profile] 14yunjae  Pairing: Yunjae Length: Chaptered [Prologue, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, Epilogue]
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13 for action

Summary: Jaejoong is “Agent J” and has been an undercover agent for as long as he remembers. Yunho has been a bodyguard with just the job in mind. But once their paths intertwine together, the tension-filled chase, fated by destiny finally begins.

Disclaimer: This fic is based solely on the movie mv of Agent J Paris Chapter of Jolin Tsai for her album “Agent J.” I have changed a lot of things, and added some scenes that were not there in the original MVs. And I’m adding an epilogue too. So except for the changes in the storyline, I own nothing.

Prologue

Chapter 1: Agent J





The church is the closest place to Heaven, but the person I have to find is the one closest to Hell.

Heavy steps echoing through the walls of this almost desolate church, I walk unto the aisle until I reach the altar. There on the book, lay the given words I seek out.

It has always been like this. I go to this church, scan the bible resting on the edge of the altar and find the face of my target imprinted on a photograph. That's how the company works. That's how it has always worked. I guess it's their way to protect their identity, in case I fail. I receive an electric current to my spine, jolting my senses (my assassin’s reflex) to wake. And that’s how I know I have a mission. T

hat’s how I know; it’s time to go to church.

It’s time to pass Judgment once again.




The target this time is Alexandre Laurent. Unlike the usual mob which deals in drugs and guns, Laurentis, as the mob is popularly known, specializes more with the sporting world. Specialize as in controls the gambles on which team wins and loses. It’s no point for talent when the game has already been decided beforehand. No point at all.

As fond as into sports Laurent is, he’s also fond of circus acts like cirque de soleil. That’s the sole reason this theater bar was established. It’s where gymnasts and players pay off their debts, when they couldn’t deliver what he wanted.

=== === ===
Two years of tracking down Agent J, and yet it was only nine months ago that I discovered how his targets were named. It was even by accident that I discovered this.

In this barely used church, stands a bible at the altar’s center. It is there that the commandment is given. It is there that judgment is passed.



I was just in the neighborhood, after a brief meeting with an acquaintance, Kim Junsu. Once again, he gave me one of the speeches I have heard so many times now.

“If you really cared for him, you would stop this nonsense…”  

He was saying a lot more, but my mind refused to comprehend anymore.

The rollercoaster of emotions I felt after that talk put a stop to my usual calm self. I wanted to shout, laugh, cry, scream, and all other things I still haven’t decided yet. I just wanted it all to be out.

I saw this church and went inside. I was hoping to find inner peace, even though it’s been a while since I last prayed. I hoped God would accept my prayers.

On one of the last rows nearing the stained glass windows, there I knelt. I prayed for what seemed like hours, pouring all my wishes and disappointments.

Finally able to find the calm that I needed, I stood up and was about to go when the large dark mahogany doors opened and revealed what I have been following for two years now.

It was Agent J.

Reflex controlled my body, immediately hiding myself into one of the pillars, hoping he hasn’t spotted me yet. He continued to walk down the aisle until he reached the altar and stopped before the Bible.

‘Now what would he be doing in a church? Is his next target a priest? Or nun?’

Agent J just continued to scan the pages of the Bible then stopped. It looked like he found what he was looking for. Standing there for a few minutes, his side still facing me from my hiding place, he continued to study the page before him.

After a few minutes, he took out the sheets of paper, took out a lighter and burned the document he was now clutching.

‘Was that hidden in that bible all along? And what is in that document?’

Satisfied with the burnt document, he turned around and walked out of the church.

I didn’t know what to do. Should I go after him? Or go look in the bible myself and hope to find more clues on who was his next target. Though if I try to follow him now, he would have long been gone by now. He always was fast ever since then, maybe his smaller frame has something to do with it.

Anyways I decided to go to the altar, and search for more clues. When I got to the altar all I could see was a pile of ash. I squatted down, and tried to make up words from the burned ashes but it was futile. Amongst the pile though was a white cardboard like the ones used for photographs.

‘So this is how his targets are chosen? But who chooses them?’

A question I would never find out.
==== ==== ====
Muffled sounds coming from the closet, where I hid the original performer, faintly resounds in the small dressing room. Now dressed in the assigned costume, I prepared myself for the performance that night. A performance I’ll make sure will be my target’s last.

//Play DBSK Before u go

This scene…

Dressed in only dark blue skin tight pants, I draw out slow but seductive steps as I come closer to the center of the stage. There on the center is the longest pole I have yet to see as it reaches the room’s high ceiling. If you could still call it a room. It was practically a small theater. And can only be used by favored patrons, and luckily for that night, Alexandre Laurent was one of them.

…reminds me of “The Last Supper”.

Moving into the music’s beat, I make sure that all eyes would be on me, at least, the target in question. Him and his men seated along one long table, enjoying their last meal. But they don’t know that.

Only I knew that.

However, the person sitting in the middle is not Jesus.

All eyes beginning to give in to lust, I start my routine. Right hand on the cold pole, I circle around it until I was in front. Dipping once and then bending my back until my fingers tapped the floor. Rising up slowly, I continue to circle the pole, returning to my position before.

Both hands now on the frigid pole, I gave myself a little push before straddling the cold metal. Legs firmly in place, I maneuvered my other hand to blow a kiss to the target while batting my eyes deliberately.

It is Satan.

Two climbs farther up, before I started to do some complicated routines that would have a pole dancer in a bar crying.

After a few moves, legs were at a split in the air, my hands and upper body slowly sliding down until said legs reached the floor. Sensually I stood up, eliciting more lust in their eyes.

Whenever humans lust, they seem to be defenseless.

Hands once again on the metal, I lifted my legs off to the side and did a side split in the air. Holding it for a few seconds before my feet descended on the floor again, I swear I think I heard a few moans emitting from the men watching me.

Right leg hooking onto the pole once again and the other foot following in suite, my hands took hold of the metal. Hands and feet working together, I climb a few more until I was 15 feet from the floor. Putting strength on my thighs, I straddle the pole once again as I bend my back and my hands reaching the pole beneath me.

A few sensual moves and I knew they were now defenseless.

A few sensual moves and that was the end of the first part of my routine.

Moving closer to them is simply to get a better look at their faces before they die.

Giving them a little treat, I moved in closer and started caressing their lustful faces, sometimes even pulling their uniformed black ties.

But now it is time for salvation.

Moving onto the second part of my routine, I come closer to the length of cloth hanging from the ceiling. Tugging it for good measure before I start on my aerial dancing.

There hidden underneath the white cloth, my Rose, its petals waiting to be blown from its stem.

Finding the perfect moment in the midst of my aerobic moves on the air, my hands suddenly crept to the Rose’s hiding place. And then…

Amen.

The petals have been blown off. His men too slow to react to even save their own lives. Unexpecting of any danger, the target now sits dead on his chair while his men lay lifeless on the floor.

Killing him is a form of salvation.

Their eyes unmoving, the irises color dulling to its paleness.

A cure for Original Sin.

OST:
Chap 1: Jay Chou - Twilight’s Chapter 7 || DBSK – Before You Go


A/N: It sucks doesn’t it? 0____0 gaaaaaaaah.. I suck at writing sexy scenes…

And btw. If you wanna see Jaejoong’s pole performance watch this… http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DWm2WEsMRpI just imagine Jae in skintight pants and topless… waaaaah.. topless, I think I died there. 0______0 (minus the other dancers of course.)

And omg.. jaejae’s so good at pole dancing and aerial dancing… I wonder why? Well you’ll know soon enough.

I’m sorry if I am updating not fast enough for your liking.. But this fic is following a schedule… it all ends in September 15. That’s all I can say… ^-----^ at least chapter 5 does… but that’s all in the future.

Btw.. a happy independence day to all pinoys!! ^---^ mabuhay tayo!!!


THIS FIC WILL BE F-LOCKED IN 72 HOURS

SPOT FOR MY BETA

on 2011-06-13 06:39 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
spot for my beta. my one & only godmother. [livejournal.com profile] mathildac3 

*hugs godmother*

Re: SPOT FOR MY BETA

on 2011-06-13 02:01 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] mathildac3.livejournal.com
Thank you baby, my dear godchild, and like I said, I liked it, keep it up and dont change anything, I will be here for you whenever you need me to beta, just send it on my email:)

PS: I am about to start writing the next chapter for Prisoner of Love:) (if you still remember the story... /blush/)

Yours always,

godmother:D

Re: SPOT FOR MY BETA

on 2011-06-14 02:14 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
no thank you to you.. for being there.. supportive and all.. and betaing for me too.. gosh.... *cries* *hugs godmother*

and of course i remember that story... i'm so confused now on which pairing i love to read.. coz gosh.. i can't decide at all.. gaaaah... please continue it godmother... ^---^

your one & only, favorite godchild,
14 :D

spot for my wifey & boyfie

on 2011-06-13 06:44 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
spot for my dear wifey [livejournal.com profile] ladyelhisa 

spot for my dear boyfie [livejournal.com profile] demonessryu 

Re: spot for my wifey & boyfie

on 2011-06-14 02:18 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ladyelhisa.livejournal.com
Claiming my spot and congratulating wifey for such a wonderful update. U_U Why are you so good here? *hugs u*

Re: spot for my wifey & boyfie

on 2011-06-14 02:22 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
aaww... *Hugs wifey so hard* u really think it i was that good? 0____0

*cuddles u & licks ur avatar* mmmmmm.... jae.... hahhaha

on 2011-06-13 09:59 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] weird-purple.livejournal.com
omg... i love this soooo much!!!! <3333
cant wait for more!!

on 2011-06-13 10:16 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
waaaah... thanks so much for loving this. *hugs u forever*

and i hope u can wait more coz update will be next month.. first week hopefully.. if muses cooperates.. ^^

thanks again for reading ^^

on 2011-06-13 03:34 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] weird-purple.livejournal.com
yes please~ i need more~ *wait patiently* ^^
it doesn't suck at all.. don't worry...
u did a good job!! keep it up~!! <333

on 2011-06-14 02:18 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
0__0 *scrambles & brainstorms for the next chapter*

i did a good job? *cries* thanks once again.. *hugs u so tight* <3333

on 2011-06-13 12:24 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] futago-u.livejournal.com
I like 8DDDD. Should definitely continue this xD. I don't know what else to say >_<... But I like Jae Joong being an agent 8D. Keep up the writing :D.

on 2011-06-14 02:29 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
thanks for liking it.. yesh i will continue.. let's pray the muses will not leave me!!!

u don't know what else to say?!? say something else!! kidding.. hehhe *hugs u*

yesh agent j.. it has a nice ring to it, doesn't it? ^--^

thanks for reading... *hugs u again*

sorry for being cuddly.. ^^

on 2011-06-13 02:17 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] jinni501.livejournal.com
HOMG!!! you really did a great job for this fic... i was like watching a movie while reading... the background music really helps a lot and what a nice ost... looking forward for the next chappie...

two thumbs up for you, sweetie!!!

on 2011-06-14 02:36 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
thanks for saying so.. though i still think it could have gone better... but my brain cells stopped working already.. 0___0

like watching a movie? really? gaaah.. *hugs u forever* and yesh.. i love the ost.. esp the jay chou song i used.. ^^

two thumbs up to you for reading this... *hugs u again*

on 2011-06-13 04:33 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] yunjae1234.livejournal.com
-dead- I think I died with those men but for a different reason..O_O
Rofl......thanks for the update....

on 2011-06-14 02:47 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
hahaha... i know what u mean... i also died while writing it.. i had to stop every now & then..

thanks for reading!!!! *hugs u so hard*

on 2011-06-14 12:33 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] jae000.livejournal.com
OMG Jae pole dancing!!
I want to see that~
O.o so Yun know how Jae get his target now...
Wonder what will happen^^
Thx for the update :)

on 2011-06-14 02:53 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
it's u again!!! *hugs, cuddles, squishes, pinches ur avatar*

sorry about that.. i just can't help spazzing over ur avatar once again...u really know how to distract me.. hehehe

yesh.. jae pole dancing.. mmmm... delicious isn't it? and if u wanna see the pole perf that it was based on.. it's in the A/N. just imagine its jae...

thanks for reading.. *hugs u this time*

on 2011-06-14 03:00 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] jae000.livejournal.com
*hugs back*
Yup it's me~
Hehe me too I never get tired of my avatar^^

on 2011-06-14 03:07 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
and that's why ur always distracting me with it.. *hugs u again*

can i add u as friend?

on 2011-06-14 03:19 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] jae000.livejournal.com
Sure loved to~
*add you too* :)

on 2011-06-14 03:20 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
added.. *glomps u & ur avatar*

on 2011-06-14 02:23 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] peaches00a.livejournal.com
This sounds very interesting
Jaejoong dancing on a pole ^___^ hehehehe

You are a fan of Jolin too? I like her. :)

Can't wait for more updates. YAY!!!

on 2011-06-14 03:03 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
yesh jae dancing on a pole..

and O.M.G.!!!!

ur a jolin fan too? waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

ahem.. now where was i? yeah. jolin fan.. *hugs u forever* it's so rare i can find a fellow cpop fan.. much less a jolin fan too.. *hugs u again*

so u already the end of this fic then.. hehehe yi ge ren & pa shen me were barely changed. so far... it was te wu j that was changed completely. i wanted them to have more time to chase around...

thanks for reading *hug u one more time*

on 2011-06-14 04:08 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] peaches00a.livejournal.com
I love Jolin. She's sooo amazing.
Happy to find another fan YAY!!!! ^____^

I like her agent J concept. But I love her wu niang era. :)

on 2011-06-14 04:21 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
yeah indeed.. i'm happy too...

when i saw agent j.. i cried.. waaah.. and kim jeawon is so handsome.. too bad he was sick during the shooting or there would have been a kiss... aigooo...

hehehe.. i haven't discovered all her eras yet.. still discovering. recently i was LSS with Zheng Yi Zhi Yan Bi Yi Zhi Yan.

do u have links where i can DL all her albums? thanks.. *hugs*

btw.. love ur dp.. i always have a soft spot for inhwan...

on 2011-06-14 04:37 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] peaches00a.livejournal.com
don't know about downloading her album but you can listen to it here: (I think you can download here too??)

http://music.sogou.com/singer/b3/detailSinger_%B2%CC%D2%C0%C1%D6.html

Of course you can check her out on youtube too. ALso I recommend watching her di chai (地才) dvd. It's really nice. I cried. Shows all her hardwork.

on 2011-06-14 04:50 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
ok... is bookmarking it now!! thanks *huggles*

on 2011-06-14 04:01 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] uw1m4.livejournal.com
your story is interesting...

and i just about to ask you if you know mathildac3 since you declare yourself her godchild... but... below notes answered it... heheheh

on 2011-06-14 04:29 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
waaah.. interesting? u think so? *hugs*

hehhehe.. yesh of course i do.. ur frends too i suppose... ^-----^

thanks for reading!! ^^

on 2011-06-15 02:53 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] nachan87.livejournal.com
Oh WOW!!!!!! This is.... addicting!!! I so want to know SO MUCH MORE!!!!! It'll be like, one update a month? I might die..... HAHAHAHAHAH

THANKS!!

on 2011-06-16 03:10 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
addicting? honto? thanks... yesh u will know so much more in the coming chapters...

yesh it will be one update per month...something like that 0___0 gomen.. please dont die on me!!!

thanks again for reading!!! *hugs*

on 2011-06-15 03:53 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] torakiss.livejournal.com
HOW CAN YOU MAKE ME READ THIS WHILE I'M BEING SO EMOSHINKI? TTT___TTT

LOL, just kidding unnie. And OMG, I did NOT imagine Jae in skin tight jeans. He looks better in boxers. XD /runs away

I'm looking forward to the next update!! XD

on 2011-06-16 03:17 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
omo is it not helping? *hugs kitty*

kidding? wae u do that to ur master? *pouts* hahha.. boxers.. u perve kitty u!!! *chases kitty*

thanks for reading!! *hugs & kisses u*

on 2011-10-08 03:51 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kazemomo.livejournal.com
the sexy scene didn't suck at all. the song went with the dancing.

what is junsu's job? is he a priest?

i guess now yunho is going to check the bible every single day just to see jea's next assignment, but if jae keeps seeing him where ever he is he's gonna get suspicious.

on 2011-10-10 12:37 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
really? it didn't suck at all? thank goodness.. *hugs*

what is junsu's job... hmmmm... ^^

lol reading the bible daily.. and for a different reason.. hahahha

thanks for reading this bb.. *hugs once again*

on 2012-05-19 07:02 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] still-doll-15.livejournal.com
hmmm... :))

okay, time for me to drop a sensible comment... xDD the only thing I probably don't like here is the switching of POVs.. it's confusing most of the time but i'm glad you there's an indication that this and that's different. white queen, try writing more on the 3rd pov^^

anyway, not so positive comment done, now for the positive comment.... WHERE DO I START? the setting, your use of words, the atmosphere... everything just fits together and makes one very good and intriguing spy story that jumps up to anyone who reads it. How you wrote it it's like I'm watching it and not reading it.

Wow. Just. WOW.

And how you describe that performance/killing scene. It's just simply perfect. And the gun = rose... Very good job on this. Now I'm regretting not reading this earlier. hahaha. ♥

on 2012-05-21 04:22 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
yeah switching povs... if i had a choice.. i didnt wanna switch povs that much.. but i gotta give yunho screentime.. after all, chapter 5.. ahahhaha.. ^^

white queen, try writing more on the 3rd pov^^
>> after finishing this fic.. i will try to write in that pov more... goodness knows i killed myself internalizing as yunho and jae... NAKAKALOKA.. 0____0

maybe u wanna watch the movie mv this was based on? ^^


Now I'm regretting not reading this earlier. hahaha. ♥
>> ahahha can't be helped i don't update on a sked after all...

on 2012-05-26 05:33 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] still-doll-15.livejournal.com
after finishing this fic.. i will try to write in that pov more...
-----YAYYYYY!

goodness knows i killed myself internalizing as yunho and jae... NAKAKALOKA.. 0____0
----adik. tagal ka ng loka-loka. pano yun? xDD parehas kaya tayo? xDD

on 2012-05-29 08:50 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
sabi ko nga eh.. lokaloka na tayo.. ^^

on 2012-10-01 12:32 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] db-sarang.livejournal.com
God God God.. it was cool and the way you described each action in words were simply perfect!

Do you mind to add me back? I would love to read the continuation of this story

sorry for the late add

on 2012-10-23 10:04 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] 14yunjae.livejournal.com
sorry for the late add.. i was busy with work.. and i haven't check emails in a while.. 0____0

mianhae.. i hope ur not mad.

please do comment on this story.. i adore comments.. ^^

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